Surprise

Chapter 2

The hand that grabbed me was cold.

Terribly cold.

For one horrifying second, I thought something was pulling me deeper into the pool.

I fought the instinct to panic.

My lungs were already aching.

I had been underwater too long.

The fingers tightened around my wrist.

Then loosened.

A warning.

Or a plea.

I looked through the narrow opening.

Beyond the wooden doors was a dark space.

But it wasn't completely flooded.

A faint light flickered somewhere inside.

I saw a face.

An older Black man.

His lips were trembling.

His eyes were wide with terror.

He pointed upward.

Then tapped his chest.

I understood.

He needed air.

I couldn't pull him through the narrow gap.

And forcing the doors might collapse whatever was holding the water back.

I kicked toward the surface.

The moment my head broke through, I gasped.

"CALL 911!"

The laughter was gone.

Guests were screaming.

Someone dropped a champagne glass.

Lily ran toward me.

"Daddy!"

I grabbed the pool edge.

"Stay back, sweetheart."

She stopped.

Tears ran down her cheeks.

"There's somebody down there, isn't there?"

I stared at her.

"Yes."

Vanessa made a small choking sound.

I looked at her.

"Who is he?"

She blinked.

"What?"

"There's a man behind those doors!"

The garden went silent.

Vanessa shook her head.

"That's impossible."

"Then explain what I just saw."

"I can't!"

Her voice broke.

"I don't know anything about a man!"

I climbed from the pool.

Water poured from my clothes.

My white shirt clung to my chest.

Someone handed me a towel.

I barely noticed.

I grabbed my phone from my discarded jacket.

Emergency services were already being contacted by several guests.

I told the dispatcher about the hidden chamber.

The dispatcher instructed us to keep everyone away from the pool and wait for trained rescuers.

I wanted to dive back down.

Every part of me screamed that the man needed help.

But I had seen the door flex under the water pressure.

If I forced it open, I might flood the chamber.

I might kill the person I was trying to save.

Lily grabbed my hand.

"Daddy, I told Vanessa yesterday."

I froze.

"What?"

My daughter wiped her eyes.

"I told her I saw something under the water."

I slowly turned toward Vanessa.

She looked away.

"What did you tell her?" I asked Lily.

"I said somebody was knocking."

My stomach twisted.

"Yesterday?"

She nodded.

"Vanessa said it was the pool pump."

I looked at the woman I had planned to marry.

"You knew she heard knocking?"

Vanessa crossed her arms.

"She's seven, Marcus. Children imagine things."

"But you knew?"

"I told you, I thought she was imagining it!"

Lily shook her head.

"She told me not to tell you."

The words struck me harder than any physical blow.

I stared at Vanessa.

"Did you?"

She looked at Lily.

Her eyes hardened.

"Lily, sweetheart, don't lie."

My daughter stepped behind me.

That movement told me more than anything Vanessa said.

Lily was afraid of her.

And I had never noticed.

Sirens sounded in the distance.

Several guests moved toward the gate.

Within minutes, firefighters, paramedics, and police officers entered the backyard.

A rescue captain introduced himself as Daniel Brooks.

He listened as I described the chamber.

Then he looked toward the pool.

"Do you know what the doors lead to?"

"No."

"Any construction plans?"

I shook my head.

"Vanessa supervised the renovation."

The captain looked toward her.

She folded her arms.

"I only handled the design choices."

He asked for the contractor's name.

Vanessa hesitated.

"Premier Aquatics."

I recognized it.

The company had charged me nearly four hundred thousand dollars for the renovation.

Captain Brooks asked whether there were any underground maintenance areas.

Vanessa said no.

But she wouldn't look at him.

The rescue team deployed specialized underwater equipment.

A diver entered the pool.

Another worker began checking the surrounding structure.

I stood beside Lily, holding her tightly.

Every minute felt like an hour.

Then the diver surfaced.

"There's a sealed service chamber behind those doors," he announced.

Captain Brooks frowned.

"Air supply?"

"Unknown. The outer doors are old, but the frame has been reinforced."

My heart pounded.

"Can you get him out?"

"We're working on a safe entry."

Vanessa suddenly spoke.

"You should drain the pool."

The captain turned.

"That might destabilize the chamber. We need to assess the structure first."

She pressed her lips together.

I watched her carefully.

Why did she want the water gone?

Did she know what was behind those doors?

The firefighters located a maintenance shaft beneath a decorative stone planter.

It had been concealed under fresh landscaping.

One worker removed the metal cover.

A narrow staircase descended into darkness.

My stomach dropped.

That entrance had been there the entire time.

Just twenty feet from where my daughter played.

Captain Brooks entered with two rescuers.

I waited beside Lily.

She held the ring box against her chest.

The diamond inside suddenly seemed meaningless.

After several tense minutes, a voice crackled over the captain's radio.

"We've reached the chamber."

I stopped breathing.

"One adult male. Conscious. Severe dehydration."

My knees nearly gave out.

Lily squeezed my hand.

"He's alive, Daddy."

I nodded.

"He's alive."

The rescuers carefully brought the man out through the maintenance passage.

He looked to be in his sixties.

His gray hair was wet.

His clothing was dirty and torn.

One wrist had deep red marks.

Paramedics rushed toward him.

I stepped closer.

"Sir, can you hear me?"

His eyes opened.

He looked directly at me.

Something changed in his expression.

Recognition.

Then fear.

"Marcus?"

I froze.

"Do I know you?"

His lips trembled.

"You're Evelyn's son."

My heart stopped.

Evelyn.

My mother.

She had died seven years earlier.

I hadn't heard a stranger say her name in a long time.

"How do you know my mother?"

The man tried to sit up.

A paramedic gently stopped him.

He grabbed my sleeve.

"Your mother was right."

I stared.

"About what?"

His eyes moved toward Vanessa.

The color drained from his face.

He began trembling.

"Don't trust her."

Vanessa took a step backward.

The man tightened his grip.

"She knows what happened to your wife."

The entire world seemed to stop.

My first wife, Rachel, had died five years earlier.

At least, that was what the police had told me.

I stared at the man.

"What did you just say?"

His breathing became shallow.

He reached into his torn shirt.

With shaking fingers, he pulled out a small silver key.

Then he whispered,

May you like

"Rachel didn't die where they told you."

And collapsed against the stretcher.

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