Surprise

Chapter 1

The first sound from Emily’s coffin was so faint I thought I had imagined it.

A small scrape.

Then two taps.

I stood beside the flower stand in my orange cleaning uniform while mourners filed into the white funeral chapel. Everyone was looking at Emily’s photograph near the door. No one was watching the coffin.

I moved closer.

Two more taps came from inside.

“Emily?” I whispered.

My voice disappeared beneath the organ music.

I pressed my ear to the lid. Someone behind me asked if I was finished cleaning. I barely heard him.

I had worked in Emily’s house for four years. I knew the way she knocked when her hands were full and she needed me to open the kitchen door.

Three quick taps. A pause. One more.

The pattern came again from the coffin.

My knees nearly gave way.

“Call someone,” I told the woman arranging flowers.

She stared at me. “What?”

I looked toward the back of the chapel. Security stood beside the doors. Emily’s husband, Daniel, was speaking to guests near the front. Beside him stood his mother, Patricia.

The coffin was supposed to be taken for burial within the hour.

I ran to a security guard.

“There’s someone moving inside,” I said. “We need to open it.”

His expression changed to pity. “Ma’am, please step away from the family.”

“She’s alive.”

He glanced at the coffin, then at my uniform. “I’ll ask the funeral director to speak with you.”

He moved toward the office at an unhurried pace.

I looked back at the coffin.

Tap. Tap. Tap.

A pause.

Tap.

I had heard that sound through closed doors when Emily was laughing with her daughter. I would have known it anywhere.

Near the rear wall, workers had left a tool case after adjusting a display. A crowbar lay across the top.

I picked it up.

I knew what everyone would think. I knew I could lose my job or be arrested. None of that mattered if I let them lower Emily into the ground while she was still trying to reach us.

“Nia?” Daniel called.

I raised the crowbar.

The first blow split the white finish. Guests gasped. The second opened a narrow crack in the lid.

People began shouting. Chairs scraped across the marble floor.

Daniel reached me and grabbed my arm.

“Stop! That’s my wife!”

“She’s alive.”

His grip tightened. “Nia, let go.”

“I heard her.”

Patricia pushed through the guests. “Get this woman out of here. She’s destroying the coffin.”

I pulled free of Daniel and pointed at the opening.

“Listen.”

He stared at me. I had watched him sit beside Emily’s bed when she had migraines. I had watched him teach their little girl, Lily, to make pancakes. For two days, grief had hollowed out his face.

I needed him to trust me for one second.

“Please,” I said.

He bent toward the crack.

The chapel fell quiet.

A faint scrape came from the other side.

Then a pale hand pressed against the opening.

Daniel stumbled backward.

I dropped the crowbar.

“Emily?” he whispered.

Her fingers moved.

“Open it!” I shouted.

Daniel seized the damaged edge of the lid. A funeral worker joined him. Together they pulled until the latch gave way.

Emily lay inside, breathing in shallow, uneven gasps.

Her eyes were partly open.

Daniel reached for her. I caught his sleeve.

“Give her room. Call an ambulance.”

Someone was already dialing. I leaned close enough for Emily to see me.

“It’s Nia,” I said. “We found you.”

Her fingers moved against the lining. I slipped my hand beneath hers.

“You’re safe,” I told her, though I had no idea yet whether that was true.

Daniel knelt on her other side.

“Emily, I’m here. Lily’s safe. Stay with me.”

At their daughter’s name, Emily tried to speak. Only a rough breath came out.

Patricia stood near the first row, one hand pressed to her mouth. She looked less shocked than I expected.

I had seen her look frightened before, when Emily asked questions about her medicine at dinner. The memory arrived so sharply I turned toward her.

“Who told you she was dead?” I asked Daniel.

“The hospital,” he said, without looking up.

“Which doctor?”

“Dr. Harlan.”

The funeral director, Mr. Vale, entered from the side door. He stopped when he saw the open coffin.

“You need to close that,” he said.

Daniel looked up at him.

“My wife is breathing.”

Vale’s face lost its color.

Two paramedics rushed through the chapel doors. I stepped back and told them what I had seen and heard. They checked Emily, lifted her onto a stretcher, and carried her out while one continued to speak to her.

Daniel followed.

I tried to go too, but security moved in front of me.

“Police are on their way,” the guard said. “You need to stay.”

“I will. Tell them to preserve everything here.”

Across the room, Patricia had her phone to her ear. When she noticed me watching, she turned away.

Lily was at home with Daniel’s sister. She had already been told her mother was gone. I imagined someone having to call her again and tell her to hope.

A police officer arrived and began asking people to remain in the chapel. I gave him my name. My hands shook so badly I could barely hold my identification.

My phone buzzed.

A message from Daniel appeared.

She’s alive. Going to the hospital. Thank you. Please come when you can.

I read it twice.

May you like

Then I remembered Emily’s last full sentence to me, spoken three days earlier as I carried her tea upstairs.

“If anyone says I’m confused, Nia, don’t believe them.”

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