Surprise

Chapter 1

My mother-in-law dropped another stack of dirty dishes beside me while I was eight months pregnant and struggling to stand.

"Don't stop until everything is clean!"

A plate struck the marble countertop so hard that I jumped.

I grabbed my stomach.

For one terrifying second, a sharp pain moved across my lower belly.

I closed my eyes and waited for it to pass.

Evelyn didn't even notice.

Or maybe she noticed and simply didn't care.

"Did you hear me, Nia?"

I nodded.

"Yes, ma'am."

"Then stop standing around."

My name is Nia Carter.

I was thirty-two years old, eight months pregnant with my first child, and married to a man I loved more than anything.

But that afternoon, standing in my husband's beautiful kitchen with tears running down my face, I felt more alone than I ever had.

The sink was overflowing.

Greasy plates covered the counters.

Takeout containers were stacked beside the stove.

And every time I finished washing something, another family member brought more.

My back was burning.

My ankles were swollen.

The baby had been moving strangely all morning.

But Evelyn, my husband's mother, acted as though I were a servant she'd hired.

"Marcus works hard to provide this house," she said. "The least you can do is keep it clean."

I swallowed.

"I've been cleaning since ten."

She laughed.

"And?"

I looked toward the living room.

Her daughter Vanessa and three female relatives were sitting comfortably beneath the chandelier.

They were laughing, eating, and watching television.

Their takeout boxes covered the coffee table.

Nobody had offered to help.

Nobody had asked whether I needed to sit down.

I turned back toward Evelyn.

"Could I please rest for a few minutes?"

Her expression hardened.

"Pregnancy isn't a disability."

I felt tears gathering.

"My doctor said I should avoid standing for too long."

Evelyn crossed her arms.

"Your doctor doesn't live in this house."

My stomach tightened.

She had said almost those exact words the previous night.

When I showed her the hospital discharge instructions.

When I explained that my blood pressure had been too high.

When I asked her to stop making me carry laundry baskets upstairs.

She'd looked at the paper.

Then laughed.

And now she was pretending she knew nothing.

I lowered my head.

"Okay."

I turned on the faucet.

Hot water splashed across my fingers.

I picked up another plate.

Then another.

My tears fell into the sink.

I tried to breathe slowly.

But the pain returned.

A tight, uncomfortable pressure across my belly.

I rested one hand against the countertop.

Evelyn sighed.

"Now what?"

"Nothing."

"Then keep moving."

I reached for another dish.

Suddenly, the kitchen doorway filled with a familiar figure.

"Nia?"

I turned.

Marcus.

My husband.

He stood in the doorway wearing a white dress shirt with the sleeves rolled up.

His black hair was neatly cut.

His beard was trimmed.

He looked as though he'd come directly from work.

But the moment he saw me, his expression changed.

His eyes moved from my swollen stomach to the mountain of dishes.

Then to my tear-streaked face.

"Baby?"

My lips trembled.

He hurried toward me.

"Why are you doing all this?"

I couldn't answer immediately.

I had been trying so hard not to cry.

But hearing his voice broke whatever strength I had left.

"Your family told me I had to."

Marcus went still.

"What?"

I wiped my cheeks.

"They said I couldn't rest until everything was finished."

He looked toward Evelyn.

She lifted her chin.

"Don't look at me like that."

Marcus stared at her.

"Mom, what is going on?"

Evelyn shrugged.

"Your wife is doing a few chores."

He looked around.

"A few?"

I saw his jaw tighten.

Then he noticed the takeout containers stacked beside the sink.

His expression darkened.

"Who made this mess?"

Evelyn rolled her eyes.

"We had lunch."

Marcus gently touched my shoulder.

"Sit down, Nia."

I shook my head.

"Marcus—"

"Please, baby."

He pulled out a chair.

I lowered myself carefully.

The moment I sat, another wave of pain moved through my stomach.

I tried not to react.

Marcus noticed anyway.

"Are you hurting?"

I swallowed.

"A little."

His face changed.

"How long?"

Before I could answer, Evelyn interrupted.

"She's been dramatic all day."

Marcus turned toward her.

Something in his expression frightened even me.

Not because I thought he'd hurt anyone.

Because I'd never seen him so furious.

He walked out of the kitchen.

I heard his footsteps crossing the hallway.

Then his voice exploded from the living room.

"WHY IS MY PREGNANT WIFE CLEANING UP AFTER ALL OF YOU?"

The television went quiet.

Vanessa laughed nervously.

"Marcus, relax."

"Answer me."

Evelyn followed him.

"She lives here too. She can contribute."

Marcus grabbed an empty takeout box and slammed it onto the coffee table.

"She's eight months pregnant!"

Nobody spoke.

I stood slowly.

I knew I should stay seated.

But I couldn't let him fight without telling him everything.

I walked toward the living room, one hand supporting my stomach.

Evelyn was standing beside Vanessa.

Her face was furious.

"Pregnancy isn't an excuse," she snapped.

Marcus pointed toward the front door.

"Then none of you need to eat in my house again."

Vanessa jumped to her feet.

"You're kicking out your own family?"

Marcus didn't hesitate.

"If that's what it takes to protect my wife."

My heart tightened.

For one moment, I almost felt safe.

Then I remembered the paper in my pocket.

The doctor's note.

The one I'd been carrying since yesterday.

The one Evelyn had read before Marcus ever came home.

I grabbed his arm.

"Wait."

He turned immediately.

"Baby?"

My voice shook.

"That's not why I was crying."

His expression changed.

"What?"

I reached into my pocket.

My fingers closed around the folded hospital document.

I handed it to him.

Marcus unfolded it.

His eyes moved across the first line.

Then his entire face lost its color.

I watched his lips part.

He looked at me.

Then back at the paper.

"Nia..."

His voice broke.

I started crying harder.

Evelyn suddenly stepped forward.

"Give me that!"

She reached for the note.

I pulled it away before her fingers touched it.

"No."

The room went silent.

I looked directly at Marcus.

"She already knew."

He slowly turned toward his mother.

May you like

His hands were trembling.

And in that moment, I knew our marriage, our family, and the future of our unborn daughter were about to change forever.

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