Surprise

Chapter 2

I drove to a twenty-four-hour diner three miles from my parents' house because I couldn't afford to book a hotel without knowing how much money I had left.

My suitcase sat on the passenger seat. My hospital badge hung from my neck, and my eyes burned from exhaustion.

I ordered coffee I barely touched and called the bank again.

This time, a fraud investigator named Ms. Reynolds answered.

“Ms. Brooks, I've reviewed the initial transaction history. Your card was used at three separate ATMs within a short period.”

“How much did they take?”

“Your available savings balance was approximately twenty-eight thousand dollars before the withdrawals. The account is now frozen while we investigate.”

I gripped the edge of the table.

Twenty-eight thousand dollars.

That money represented years of overtime, skipped holidays, and nights when I'd eaten instant noodles because I was saving for a small apartment of my own.

“Do you know who withdrew it?”

“We have preliminary information, but we'll need to complete verification before making a formal determination. We have preserved the relevant footage.”

I swallowed hard.

“Please don't release anything to my family.”

“We won't discuss your account with unauthorized individuals.”

After the call, I sat staring at the coffee until it went cold.

My phone vibrated.

It was my mother.

I answered because some foolish part of me still wanted to believe she might apologize.

“Nia, where are you?”

“Somewhere I can sleep without being robbed.”

She sighed.

“Don't start with that. Your brother says you gave him permission to use the card.”

My fingers tightened around the phone.

“He stole it from my purse while I was working.”

“Darius says you told him he could borrow money.”

“Did you see me tell him that?”

Silence.

“Your father thinks we should settle this privately.”

I almost laughed.

“Privately? You watched him throw me out.”

“He was angry.”

“So was I. Did I steal his savings?”

“Nia, he's your brother.”

“And I'm your daughter.”

The words came out quieter than I intended.

For a moment, I thought she might finally understand.

Instead, she whispered, “Please don't ruin his life over money.”

I ended the call.

A few minutes later, Darius sent me a message.

YOU BETTER NOT INVOLVE THE POLICE. YOU HAVE NO IDEA WHAT YOU'RE GETTING INTO.

I read it twice.

Then I took a screenshot and sent it to the bank investigator.

I didn't know whether the message was an admission, a threat, or both. But I knew one thing: if Darius genuinely believed he'd done nothing wrong, he wouldn't be begging me to stay silent.

At six the next morning, I drove to the hospital.

I had barely slept, but my patients still needed me. I changed into fresh scrubs, washed my face, and tried to pretend that my life hadn't fallen apart overnight.

My colleague Simone noticed immediately.

“Girl, what happened to you?”

I told her enough to explain the suitcase in my car and the tears I couldn't quite hide.

She listened without interrupting.

When I finished, she pulled me into a hug.

“You don't have to protect people who are hurting you.”

I wanted to believe her.

During my lunch break, I called a local legal aid office. A receptionist explained that I could report unauthorized withdrawals directly to the police and ask the bank about the documentation required for a criminal investigation.

I made an appointment for that afternoon.

Then I received a call from an unfamiliar number.

“Nia Brooks?” a man asked.

“Yes.”

“My name is Detective Harris. Your bank referred the suspected unauthorized withdrawals for review. I'd like to speak with you about what happened.”

My heart began pounding.

I gave him the basic facts and agreed to meet him after my shift.

Before hanging up, he asked whether anyone had threatened me.

I remembered Darius's message.

“Yes,” I said. “My brother told me not to involve the police.”

“Please preserve that message. Don't delete anything related to this incident.”

After work, I met Detective Harris at the station. He listened while I described the missing card, the withdrawals, and the way my family had reacted.

He didn't promise that Darius would be arrested. He explained that the investigation would depend on the available evidence and the applicable law.

That honesty made me trust him more.

As I was leaving, my phone rang again.

It was my father.

“Come home,” Arthur ordered. “We need to talk.”

I stood outside the station, looking at the traffic moving past.

“Why?”

“Because this situation has gotten out of hand.”

“Did you know Darius took my card?”

He paused.

“I knew he was having financial difficulties.”

“That wasn't my question.”

His voice hardened.

“Don't accuse me of things you can't prove.”

Then he hung up.

I stared at my phone, feeling a new kind of fear settle over me.

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My father hadn't denied knowing what happened.

He had only warned me not to accuse him.

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