Surprise

Chapter 1

“Give me those keys!”

Before I could understand what was happening, my wife snatched a set of car keys from my daughter's hand.

Maya stumbled backward.

The beautiful silver sedan parked in our driveway still had an enormous white bow across its hood.

It was supposed to be her graduation present.

A surprise I'd spent months planning.

But Denise was already pushing the keys toward her seventeen-year-old son.

“He needs this car more than you do.”

Maya stared at her.

“What?”

“You heard me.”

Denise grabbed Jordan's wrist and pressed the keys into his palm.

“Take them.”

Jordan didn't move.

He looked at Maya.

Then at his mother.

“Mom, I don't think—”

“Jordan, be quiet.”

Maya's face crumpled.

“That car is mine!”

Denise laughed.

“Your father can buy you another one.”

I had just stepped out of the garage when Maya turned toward me.

“Dad!”

She ran so quickly that her backpack slipped off one shoulder.

Tears streamed down her cheeks.

“Dad, she's taking the car you bought me!”

I caught her by the shoulders.

“Sweetheart, slow down.”

But she was already pulling her turquoise phone from her pocket.

“Look!”

She shoved it into my hand.

On the screen were messages from Denise.

Give Jordan the car.

Don't argue with me.

You have enough already.

My jaw tightened.

I looked across the driveway.

Denise stood beside the silver sedan wearing her burgundy blouse and an expression that suggested she expected me to agree with her.

Jordan stood several feet away.

He looked miserable.

The keys hung loosely from his fingers.

I looked back at my daughter's phone.

There were more messages.

But before I could read them, Maya whispered something that stopped my heart.

“She said if I refused, I shouldn't come home.”

I stared at her.

“What?”

Maya wiped her face.

“She said I wasn't welcome here anymore.”

For a moment, I couldn't breathe.

My name is Marcus Williams.

I'm forty-eight years old.

I own a successful construction business outside Charlotte, North Carolina.

And seventeen years ago, I became the father of the most important person in my life.

My daughter, Maya.

Her mother, Nicole, died when Maya was seven.

Before cancer took Nicole, I promised her that our little girl would never have to question whether she belonged.

I spent the next several years trying to keep that promise.

I packed school lunches.

Attended dance recitals.

Learned how to care for her natural curls.

And sat beside her bed through countless nights when she cried because she missed her mother.

When I met Denise six years ago, I thought I'd finally found someone who could share that love.

Denise had a son, Jordan, who was the same age as Maya.

At first, the children got along.

They played video games together.

Helped each other with homework.

And sometimes defended each other when Denise complained that teenagers were impossible.

I thought we were building a family.

But lately, something had changed.

Maya had become quieter.

Jordan seemed uncomfortable whenever Denise discussed money.

And my wife had started making strange comments about how much I spent on my daughter.

I told myself it was ordinary family tension.

Until that afternoon.

I looked directly at Denise.

“You told my daughter to give away her car?”

Denise folded her arms.

“Marcus, don't make this dramatic.”

“Answer me.”

She sighed.

“Jordan deserves something too.”

I stared at her.

“Jordan has nothing to do with Maya's graduation present.”

Denise's eyes narrowed.

“Maya already gets everything from you.”

My daughter made a small, wounded sound behind me.

I turned slightly.

She was staring at the ground.

Her hands were shaking.

I felt anger rise through my chest.

“What exactly do you mean by everything?”

Denise threw up her hands.

“Expensive clothes. Private tutoring. College savings. Now a brand-new car.”

I took a breath.

“Maya earned a full academic scholarship.”

“So?”

“She graduated near the top of her class. She's worked hard.”

Denise pointed toward Jordan.

“And my son hasn't?”

Jordan looked embarrassed.

“Mom, please.”

She ignored him.

“You always celebrate Maya while Jordan gets whatever is left.”

I looked at the young man standing beside the car.

Jordan was seventeen.

Quiet.

Respectful.

And clearly uncomfortable with what was happening.

I had never treated him like a stranger.

I'd paid for his sports equipment, helped him study, and promised to support his plans after graduation.

But I hadn't promised him Maya's property.

I pointed toward the silver sedan.

“That car is titled in Maya's name.”

Denise went still.

I continued.

“I bought it for her. It's legally hers.”

Denise lifted her chin.

“Then what about MY son?”

My voice became cold.

“Your son isn't the problem.”

I stepped closer.

“The way you treat my daughter is.”

Jordan lowered his eyes.

Denise stared at me in disbelief.

“You're embarrassing me.”

I looked at Maya's tear-stained face.

“No. You embarrassed yourself.”

Denise turned toward Jordan.

“Give me those keys.”

He hesitated.

I held out my hand.

“Jordan.”

He looked at me.

“Give them to me, son.”

He immediately placed the keys in my palm.

“I'm sorry, Marcus.”

I shook my head.

“You have nothing to apologize for.”

Then I walked toward Maya.

Her eyes widened.

I placed the keys gently in her hand.

“Nobody takes anything from you again.”

She began crying harder.

“Daddy…”

I pulled her into my arms.

She clung to me.

And something about the way she held me made my heart ache.

She wasn't crying because she'd almost lost a car.

She was crying because she'd been afraid of losing her home.

I kissed her forehead.

“You're safe, sweetheart.”

Denise scoffed.

“Oh, that's ridiculous.”

I turned toward her.

“What's ridiculous?”

“She acts like I'm some kind of monster.”

I looked down at Maya's phone.

Then I scrolled.

There were messages I'd never seen.

Messages sent while I was away on business trips.

You should be grateful I let you live here.

Stop acting like your dead mother makes you special.

Jordan deserves the life your father keeps wasting on you.

I stopped breathing.

My thumb moved farther down.

Another message appeared.

If you tell Marcus anything, I'll make sure he regrets choosing you.

I felt the blood drain from my face.

My daughter had been receiving threats inside my own home.

And I'd known nothing.

I looked slowly toward Denise.

Her confident smile vanished.

I raised the phone.

“And I read the rest of your messages.”

Her face went pale.

“Marcus, wait—”

But I wasn't listening anymore.

Because the next message on Maya's phone contained a photograph.

It showed a document bearing my signature.

A document I'd never signed.

May you like

And beneath it, Denise had written six words.

Your father already agreed to everything.

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