Surprise

Chapter 1

The morning I hid beneath my teenage daughter's bed, I expected to catch her sneaking someone into our house.

Instead, I watched a stranger wearing heavy brown work boots enter her bedroom, stop inches from my face, and wait for her to come home.

But the most terrifying part wasn't the stranger.

It was the moment I realized my daughter had known someone was coming.

My name is Angela Robinson.

I was thirty-eight years old, and until that Thursday morning, I believed the worst thing my sixteen-year-old daughter could be hiding was a secret boyfriend.

I had no idea that someone had been entering our house for weeks.

And I certainly didn't know why.

It began at 7:15 that morning.

Maya stood beside our front door wearing her gray hoodie, blue jeans, and oversized black school backpack.

Her hair was pulled into a loose ponytail.

She looked exhausted.

Dark shadows circled her eyes.

I had noticed them for days.

"Did you sleep last night?" I asked.

She adjusted her backpack.

"Yeah, Mom."

"You don't look like it."

"I'm fine."

She reached for the door.

I stepped closer.

"Maya, wait."

She stopped.

"What's wrong?"

I studied her face.

For almost two weeks, my daughter had been acting strangely.

She stopped inviting friends over.

She locked her bedroom door.

She jumped whenever someone rang the doorbell.

And three times that week, she'd returned home during school hours with excuses that didn't make sense.

On Monday, she'd forgotten a notebook.

Tuesday, she'd complained about a headache.

Wednesday, she'd claimed her teacher sent her home early.

I had called the school.

They told me Maya had been marked absent for two full afternoons.

When I confronted her, she started crying.

Then she begged me not to ask any more questions.

That frightened me more than any teenage lie.

"Are you having trouble at school?" I asked.

She shook her head.

"No."

"Is someone bothering you?"

Her fingers tightened around the strap of her backpack.

"No, Mom."

"Then why do you keep coming home?"

For one second, I saw pure panic in her eyes.

Then she looked away.

"I have to go."

She opened the front door.

Bright morning sunlight flooded our hallway.

I watched her walk down the porch steps.

She reached the sidewalk.

Then suddenly stopped.

Maya turned and looked back toward our house.

Not casually.

Not the way someone looks when they've forgotten something.

She stared at the upstairs bedroom window.

Her expression changed.

Fear.

Then something that looked like a warning.

I lifted my hand.

She didn't wave back.

Instead, she pulled her hood over her head and hurried away.

I stood in the doorway until she disappeared around the corner.

Then I quietly closed the door.

Something was wrong.

Terribly wrong.

For several seconds, I listened to the silence.

Our house was usually peaceful during the morning.

My husband, Marcus, had died three years earlier in a highway accident.

Since then, it had been just Maya and me.

I worked as an office manager at a dental clinic.

We lived in a comfortable suburban neighborhood outside Atlanta.

Nothing dramatic ever happened on our street.

At least, that was what I'd always believed.

I walked toward the kitchen.

Then stopped.

A faint sound came from upstairs.

Three small knocks.

I froze.

Our old house sometimes creaked.

The heating system made strange sounds.

But these were deliberate knocks.

One.

Two.

Three.

They seemed to come from Maya's bedroom.

I looked toward the staircase.

"Maya?"

No answer.

Of course there wasn't.

I'd just watched her leave.

I climbed the stairs carefully.

Halfway up, I heard another noise.

A soft scraping sound.

Like someone moving furniture across carpet.

My heart began pounding.

I reached the hallway.

Maya's bedroom door stood slightly open.

That was strange.

She usually kept it closed.

I pushed it wider.

"Maya?"

The room looked ordinary.

Her wooden bed stood against the far wall.

Books covered her desk.

A lavender blanket lay folded near the pillows.

But something felt different.

The window was unlocked.

And beneath it, the curtain moved slightly.

I stepped closer.

A small muddy mark stained the carpet.

My throat tightened.

Neither Maya nor I owned heavy work boots.

I looked toward her closet.

Then toward the bed.

A memory suddenly returned.

Two nights earlier, Maya had asked me something strange.

"Mom, if you thought somebody was watching our house, would you call the police?"

I'd laughed nervously.

"Of course. Why?"

She'd immediately said she was joking.

Now that conversation didn't feel funny.

I heard a car door slam outside.

Then the faint creak of our front porch.

My entire body went cold.

Someone was approaching.

I rushed toward Maya's bedroom door.

From downstairs came a metallic clicking sound.

Our front door lock.

Someone was opening it.

I grabbed my phone.

No signal.

The screen showed one small bar that disappeared almost immediately.

I remembered that reception was unreliable in the upstairs back bedroom.

Footsteps sounded downstairs.

Slow.

Heavy.

Deliberate.

I could hear the weight of each step against the wooden floor.

I glanced around.

The closet was too close to the door.

The bathroom had no lock.

Then I looked at Maya's bed.

I dropped to my knees.

My heart hammered as I lowered myself onto the carpet.

I slid beneath the wooden frame, pulling my legs in carefully.

Dust brushed my cheek.

The space was narrow.

I pressed my back against the wall.

And waited.

The footsteps reached the stairs.

One step.

Then another.

I covered my mouth.

My breathing sounded impossibly loud.

The person stopped outside Maya's room.

The doorknob moved.

Slowly, the door opened.

I saw the shadow first.

Then a pair of blue jeans.

Heavy brown work boots stepped onto the carpet.

The boots were wet.

Mud clung to the soles.

The stranger moved toward the bed.

Then stopped.

Only inches from my face.

I could see a small scratch across the leather of the right boot.

I tried not to breathe.

The person stood motionless.

Then something dropped onto Maya's mattress.

A heavy object.

I heard fabric moving.

The stranger was searching through her belongings.

My hands trembled so badly that I pressed them against the carpet.

I wanted to scream.

I wanted to run.

But the boots were directly in front of me.

Then a second sound came from downstairs.

The front door opened.

A familiar voice called out.

"Mom?"

My heart stopped.

Maya.

She had come back.

The stranger's boots turned sharply toward the bedroom door.

I pressed both hands over my mouth.

Then I heard my daughter whisper from the hallway.

May you like

"Please tell me you didn't touch her."

And for the first time that morning, I realized Maya might know exactly who was standing above me.

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