Surprise

Chapter 1

The chocolate hit me before I understood what was happening.

One second, I was standing beneath a beautiful crystal chandelier, smiling at the people who had gathered to celebrate my engagement.

The next, a heavy chocolate fountain was tipping straight toward me.

I heard someone scream.

Then thick, warm chocolate exploded across my white gown.

I stumbled backward, grabbing the front of my dress as the dark liquid soaked into the delicate fabric.

"Oh my God!"

My voice cracked.

Chocolate dripped from my sleeves, my waist, and the beautiful lace my mother had helped me choose.

The entire room fell silent.

I could feel dozens of eyes watching me.

My engagement party.

The night I had dreamed about for months.

Ruined in seconds.

I looked toward the table where the fountain had stood.

Vanessa was standing behind it.

My fiancé's older sister.

Her hands were still hovering near the edge of the table.

For one brief moment, I saw something strange on her face.

Satisfaction.

Then she covered her mouth.

"Oh, Nia! What happened?"

She rushed toward me, pretending to look horrified.

"Are you okay? I can't believe that thing fell!"

I couldn't answer.

My throat was tightening.

I had spent six months planning this evening.

My fiancé, Isaiah, and I had worked extra hours to pay for the celebration. My mother had spent three weekends helping me find the perfect white engagement gown.

Now it looked like someone had poured an entire bucket of mud over me.

Vanessa grabbed a napkin.

"Here, let me help."

She pressed it against my gown, spreading the chocolate even farther.

"Stop!"

I stepped away.

Her expression changed.

Only for a second.

Then she looked hurt.

"I'm just trying to help you."

A few guests began whispering.

Someone offered me a towel.

Someone else asked whether the fountain had been secured properly.

I wanted to disappear.

Then a calm voice cut through the room.

"Vanessa."

Everyone turned.

Evelyn Carter stood near the glass wall.

Isaiah's mother.

She was sixty-two, elegant, and usually quiet at family gatherings.

Tonight, she wore a beautiful black dress and a diamond necklace that had belonged to her mother.

She wasn't looking at my ruined gown.

She was looking directly at her daughter.

"You think that was an accident?"

Vanessa gave a nervous laugh.

"What are you talking about, Mom?"

Evelyn didn't move.

"I saw exactly what you did."

My heart seemed to stop.

Vanessa's smile disappeared.

"Excuse me?"

"You heard me."

"Mom, the fountain fell. That's all."

Evelyn folded her arms.

"Did it fall, Vanessa? Or did you push it?"

A gasp traveled through the room.

I looked from one woman to the other.

My hands were trembling.

"Push it?"

Vanessa turned toward me.

"Nia, don't listen to her. Mom must have misunderstood."

But Evelyn shook her head.

"No misunderstanding."

Vanessa's voice grew sharper.

"Why would I push a chocolate fountain onto my brother's fiancée?"

"That's what I'd like to know."

The words landed heavily.

I remembered something.

Earlier that evening, Vanessa had insisted that I stand beside the dessert table for photographs.

She had adjusted the skirt of my gown.

She had moved me closer to the fountain.

And she had smiled.

I had thought she was finally being kind.

For months, Vanessa had treated me like an outsider.

She criticized my clothes.

She questioned my career.

She made jokes about my family not being wealthy enough for the Carters.

But Isaiah always told me his sister had a difficult personality.

"She'll come around," he would say.

I wanted to believe him.

Now I wasn't so sure.

"Mom, you're embarrassing yourself," Vanessa snapped.

Evelyn slowly lifted one hand.

Then she pointed toward the enormous glass wall behind her daughter.

"Look."

Vanessa turned.

At first, I didn't understand.

The glass reflected the chandeliers, the guests, and the dessert table.

But near the edge of the reflection, something else was visible.

A phone.

Positioned at an angle toward the fountain.

Its camera was recording.

Vanessa went completely still.

Evelyn raised the phone she was holding.

The same phone whose camera Vanessa had failed to notice.

"I was recording the decorations for Nia," Evelyn said.

Her voice remained perfectly calm.

"And you walked straight into the frame."

Vanessa swallowed.

"Mom..."

Evelyn looked at the screen.

"I was going to send her a beautiful memory of tonight."

She paused.

"Instead, I recorded you destroying it."

My knees felt weak.

I looked at Vanessa.

"Is that true?"

She refused to meet my eyes.

"Nia, please. It's not what you think."

"What am I supposed to think?"

Tears ran down my cheeks.

"You knew how much tonight meant to me."

Vanessa's face tightened.

"You're making this bigger than it is."

Something inside me broke.

"Bigger than it is?"

I lifted the ruined skirt of my gown.

"You destroyed my dress in front of everyone!"

"It was an accident!"

"Then why is your mother saying she saw you?"

Vanessa turned sharply toward Evelyn.

"Give me that phone."

Evelyn didn't move.

"Why?"

"Because you're twisting everything!"

"Then the recording should clear your name."

The room became painfully quiet.

Vanessa suddenly lunged forward.

Her hand shot toward the phone.

Evelyn pulled it away just in time.

"Don't you dare."

The anger in her voice made Vanessa freeze.

For the first time since I had known her, Vanessa looked frightened of her mother.

Evelyn tapped the screen.

I could see the opening frame.

The beautiful dessert table.

The chocolate fountain.

Me standing nearby, smiling for a photograph.

Then Vanessa appeared behind me.

My stomach twisted.

She wasn't stumbling.

She wasn't reaching for a falling decoration.

She was looking directly at my back.

And her hands were moving toward the fountain.

"Delete it," Vanessa whispered.

Evelyn looked up.

"What did you say?"

Vanessa's voice trembled.

"Please, Mom. Delete it."

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Evelyn pressed play.

And as the video began moving, I realized the destruction of my gown might not have been the worst thing Vanessa had done that night.

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