Surprise

Chapter 1

The receptionist's smile vanished the moment I gave her my name.

"Reservation for Nia Bennett."

She typed something into her computer.

Then she stopped.

Her fingers remained suspended above the keyboard.

I had traveled four hours to surprise my husband.

Instead, I was about to discover that he had been lying to me for months.

"Is something wrong?" I asked.

The woman behind the marble counter looked at me with an expression I couldn't understand.

Pity.

Fear.

And something that looked almost like recognition.

"Mrs. Bennett," she said carefully, "someone has already checked into your suite."

I frowned.

"That's impossible."

She glanced toward the elevators.

"Actually, ma'am, your husband checked in earlier."

My stomach tightened.

"My husband?"

She nodded.

"Marcus Bennett."

I stared at her.

"Marcus is supposed to be in Charlotte."

Before she could answer, an elevator chimed behind me.

The doors opened.

And there he was.

My husband.

The man I'd loved for eleven years.

Walking through a luxury hotel lobby with another woman's hand wrapped tightly around his arm.

My name is Nia Bennett.

I'm thirty-three years old, and until that afternoon, I believed my marriage was one of the few things in my life I could always depend on.

Marcus and I had been together since our early twenties.

We met at a friend's graduation party in Atlanta.

He was charming, ambitious, and handsome enough to make me forget the name of the person who introduced us.

But it wasn't his appearance that made me fall in love.

It was the way he listened.

When I talked about wanting to build my own interior design business, he remembered every detail.

When my mother became ill, he drove me to appointments without complaining.

When I cried over losing my first major client, he sat beside me on the kitchen floor and promised that one failure wouldn't define my future.

I believed him.

And eventually, I married him.

We bought a townhouse outside Atlanta.

I built my design company from a spare bedroom.

Marcus became a regional director at a commercial real estate firm.

From the outside, our lives looked beautiful.

We had good jobs.

A comfortable home.

Friends who admired us.

And a marriage people often described as something special.

What nobody knew was that things had changed during the previous six months.

Marcus started traveling constantly.

Charlotte.

Nashville.

Savannah.

He came home exhausted.

His phone remained face down.

He stopped asking about my business.

And whenever I suggested we take a weekend away together, he had another excuse.

At first, I blamed work.

Then I blamed myself.

Maybe I was too busy.

Maybe we'd forgotten how to spend time together.

Maybe marriage simply became quieter after eleven years.

I wanted to fix it.

So I booked a romantic weekend at the beautiful Grand Magnolia Hotel in Savannah.

The hotel was famous for its rooftop restaurant, marble lobby, and enormous suites overlooking the historic district.

I reserved one of its premium suites for three nights.

I paid the deposit from my personal account.

And I planned to surprise Marcus after what he claimed would be his final business meeting in Charlotte.

I had already told him I was visiting a design showroom in Savannah.

He said he'd be away until Monday.

Perfect, I thought.

I would check in early, decorate the suite with flowers, and call him with the surprise.

I imagined his smile.

I imagined us laughing about how I'd managed to keep the secret.

I never imagined another woman would already be standing beside him.

When I entered the lobby, I wore cream trousers and a fitted brown zip-up top.

My long black curls fell over my shoulders.

I carried two travel bags, one black and one tan.

I was tired from driving.

But I was excited.

I walked directly to the reception desk.

"Reservation for Nia Bennett."

The receptionist smiled.

"Welcome to the Grand Magnolia. I'm Monica."

She looked to be in her late fifties, with a highlighted bob, a navy blazer, and kind eyes.

"May I see your identification?"

I handed it over.

She typed.

Then stopped smiling.

I noticed immediately.

"Is there a problem?"

She glanced between my identification and the computer.

"Mrs. Bennett, may I confirm something?"

"Of course."

"Are you traveling with your husband?"

I laughed.

"Eventually. It's supposed to be a surprise."

Her expression tightened.

I felt uneasy.

"Why?"

She lowered her voice.

"Someone has already checked into the suite under your reservation."

I frowned.

"Who?"

She hesitated.

Then whispered, "Marcus Bennett."

My heart began pounding.

"That's impossible. He's out of town."

Monica glanced toward the elevators.

And that was when I heard the chime.

I turned.

The elevator doors opened.

Marcus stepped out wearing a white dress shirt and navy trousers.

His hand rested over the fingers of a beautiful woman in a fitted burgundy dress.

She had sleek black hair, elegant makeup, and a smile that disappeared the moment she saw me.

Marcus stopped so suddenly that the woman nearly stumbled.

Our eyes met.

I knew his face better than my own.

I knew when he was worried.

When he was angry.

When he was trying not to laugh.

But I had never seen him look that frightened.

"Nia?"

My voice sounded unfamiliar.

"Marcus?"

The woman immediately pulled her arm away.

She looked at him.

"You told me your wife wouldn't be here."

The words struck me harder than a slap.

I stared at her.

Then at him.

"Your wife?"

Marcus opened his mouth.

Nothing came out.

I walked toward them.

My hands were trembling.

"What is she talking about?"

"Nia, please."

"Please what?"

He glanced around the lobby.

Several guests had stopped walking.

A bellman looked away.

Marcus stepped closer.

"Let's not do this here."

I took a step backward.

"Don't touch me."

The woman in burgundy looked shaken.

"I'm sorry," she whispered.

I turned toward her.

"Who are you?"

She swallowed.

"Vanessa."

"Vanessa what?"

"Vanessa Reed."

I stared at my husband.

"How long?"

He looked toward the reception desk.

"Not here."

I almost laughed.

The man I'd trusted for eleven years was worried about being embarrassed in a hotel lobby.

I had driven four hours to surprise him.

He had brought another woman into the suite I'd reserved.

And now he wanted privacy.

"Marcus, answer me."

He lowered his voice.

"Nia, you're misunderstanding."

Vanessa turned sharply.

"No, Marcus. Don't do that."

His face changed.

She looked at me.

"He told me you two were separating."

My breath caught.

"What?"

Vanessa's eyes filled.

"He said the marriage was practically over."

I stared at my husband.

He couldn't meet my eyes.

Then Monica spoke from behind the desk.

"Mrs. Bennett?"

I turned.

Her face was serious.

"There's something else about the reservation."

My heart began pounding again.

"What?"

She looked at Marcus.

Then at Vanessa.

"I think you need to know what was added to your booking."

Marcus suddenly stepped forward.

"Monica, that's not necessary."

The receptionist straightened.

"I'm speaking with the person who made the reservation, sir."

I looked at my husband.

For the first time, I saw genuine panic in his eyes.

Then I turned back toward Monica.

May you like

"Tell me everything."

And she reached beneath the desk for a printed document.

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