Surprise

Chapter 1

My twin sister got a brand-new Rolls-Royce for our twenty-second birthday.

I got a tiny jewelry box.

And just when I thought my father couldn't humiliate me any further, a lawyer walked into our birthday party with a sealed envelope that made his face turn white.

But the real shock wasn't what my grandfather had left me.

It was what my father had been hiding.

My name is Nia Carter.

I was born eleven minutes before my twin sister, Maya.

Same birthday.

Same parents.

Same home.

But somehow, we had spent twenty-two years living completely different lives.

Maya was the daughter everyone celebrated.

I was the daughter everyone expected to understand.

That Saturday afternoon, our family mansion in Atlanta looked like something from a celebrity magazine.

Pink-and-gold balloons covered the grand staircase.

Crystal chandeliers sparkled above the marble floors.

A three-tiered birthday cake stood in the center of the dining room.

More than seventy guests had gathered to celebrate us.

Or at least, that was what the invitations said.

In reality, everyone was there for Maya.

My sister stood near the enormous windows wearing a bright lime-green designer dress.

Her long curls fell perfectly over her shoulders.

She laughed loudly as our cousins took pictures of her.

I stood beside the dessert table in a burgundy blouse and black trousers.

I had bought them myself.

Nobody had asked what I wanted to wear.

Nobody had asked how I wanted to celebrate.

And nobody seemed to notice that I had spent the entire morning arranging flowers, checking the catering, and making sure Maya's favorite cake arrived on time.

Then my father clapped his hands.

“Everyone! I have a special surprise!”

The music stopped.

My father, Marcus Carter, stood beside the enormous doors leading to our private garage.

He was forty-eight, athletic, confident, and successful.

He owned several car dealerships across Georgia.

People admired him.

They called him generous.

They called him a wonderful family man.

I had spent my entire life wondering why his generosity seemed to stop whenever it reached me.

“Maya, sweetheart,” he announced, “come here!”

My sister squealed.

“Daddy! What did you do?”

He grinned.

“Something my princess deserves.”

Then he threw a set of luxury car keys toward her.

Maya caught them.

The garage doors slowly opened.

And there it was.

A brand-new black Rolls-Royce.

A giant red bow stretched across its polished hood.

For several seconds, even the guests were silent.

Then the room exploded.

People screamed.

Phones appeared everywhere.

Maya jumped into our father's arms.

“Oh my God! Daddy! I love you!”

He spun her around.

“Only the best for my little girl!”

My stomach tightened.

I knew the car cost hundreds of thousands of dollars.

Three months earlier, I had asked my father to help me pay for a graduate business program.

He had told me money was tight.

I remembered standing in his office while he explained how important it was for young people to learn financial responsibility.

I had thanked him.

Then I applied for additional scholarships and worked extra shifts at the accounting firm where I was employed.

Now I watched him hand my sister a car worth more than my entire education.

Still, I clapped.

Because that was what I had learned to do.

Celebrate Maya.

Stay quiet.

Never make the family uncomfortable.

Then my father turned toward me.

“Oh, Nia. Almost forgot.”

Several guests laughed awkwardly.

He reached into his pocket and handed me a small velvet jewelry box.

“And this is yours.”

I stared at it.

“Thank you, Dad.”

“Go ahead. Open it.”

I lifted the lid.

Inside was a delicate silver bracelet with a small heart charm.

It was pretty.

I would have appreciated it under almost any other circumstances.

But standing beside a Rolls-Royce decorated with an enormous bow, it felt like a cruel joke.

Maya leaned over my shoulder.

“Aww! That's cute.”

She smiled.

“Very you.”

I knew what she meant.

Small.

Simple.

Unimportant.

My mother, Claire, moved beside me.

She wore an elegant cream dress and diamond earrings.

For a moment, her expression softened.

She placed an arm around my shoulders.

“It's beautiful, honey.”

I nodded.

“Yes, Mom.”

But my voice sounded strange.

My throat was tightening.

I looked at my father.

Then at the car.

Then at the tiny bracelet resting in my palm.

And something inside me finally cracked.

“Dad?”

He was already turning back toward Maya.

“What?”

I swallowed.

“We were born on the same day.”

He frowned.

“I know that, Nia.”

“Then why am I always treated differently?”

The laughter stopped.

My sister slowly lowered her phone.

My mother tightened her arm around me.

My father stared as though I had insulted him.

“Excuse me?”

I took a shaky breath.

“I'm happy for Maya. I really am. But I don't understand why everything is always so different.”

His expression hardened.

“Nia, don't start.”

“I'm not trying to ruin anything.”

“Then be grateful for what you got.”

The words landed like a slap.

Several guests looked away.

Maya crossed her arms.

“Seriously, Nia? You're making this weird.”

I felt tears rising.

I hated that.

I hated crying in front of people who already thought I was weak.

“I'm sorry,” I whispered.

My father shook his head.

“Unbelievable.”

Then he turned away.

Just like that.

My birthday was over.

Maya's celebration continued.

I closed the jewelry box and slipped it into my pocket.

I was preparing to leave when the enormous front doors opened.

A man in a dark navy suit stepped inside.

He carried a thick sealed folder.

I recognized him immediately.

Mr. Jonathan Bennett.

He had been my grandfather's attorney for nearly fifteen years.

My grandfather, Samuel Carter, had died eight months earlier.

He was the only person in my family who had ever made me feel equally loved.

Mr. Bennett walked directly toward us.

“I'm sorry to interrupt.”

My father turned.

“Jonathan? What are you doing here?”

The attorney ignored his irritation.

“I need Nia's signature immediately.”

My father's smile disappeared.

“What signature?”

Mr. Bennett looked at me.

“Miss Carter, I apologize for arriving during your celebration. But a legal deadline requires your attention.”

I stared at him.

“Mine?”

“Yes.”

He handed me the folder.

My father stepped forward.

“Jonathan, we can discuss this privately.”

“No, Marcus.”

The attorney's voice was calm.

“This concerns Nia.”

A terrible silence settled over the room.

I looked down at the folder.

My grandfather's name appeared across the front.

Samuel Edward Carter.

My hands began trembling.

Mr. Bennett continued.

“Your grandfather left specific instructions concerning the Carter family estate.”

My father looked pale.

“Jonathan.”

The attorney didn't stop.

“He directed that the estate pass to the granddaughter he believed had been treated unfairly.”

I stopped breathing.

Maya's smile vanished.

My mother lowered her hand from my shoulder.

Mr. Bennett looked directly at me.

“Nia, that granddaughter is you.”

For several seconds, nobody spoke.

Then Maya laughed nervously.

“That's ridiculous.”

My father reached for the folder.

“Let me see that.”

Mr. Bennett moved it away.

“It's addressed to Nia.”

I looked toward my father.

His face had gone completely white.

Then the attorney said something that made every guest turn toward the open garage.

“And the Rolls-Royce parked outside is listed among the assets purchased through the estate.”

Maya stared at him.

“What?”

My father took a sudden step backward.

I looked at the car.

Then at the sealed folder in my hands.

And as I slowly began opening it, Mr. Bennett leaned closer.

“Nia, before you read this, you need to know one more thing.”

I looked up.

“What?”

His expression became painfully serious.

“Your grandfather suspected someone in this family was stealing from you long before he died.”

I felt the floor shift beneath me.

“Stealing what?”

Mr. Bennett glanced toward my father.

“Your inheritance.”

My father suddenly shouted.

“That's enough!”

And in that instant, I realized the birthday party had exposed something much bigger than favoritism.

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My father wasn't simply giving Maya everything.

He might have been giving her things that belonged to me.

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