Surprise

Chapter 3

I was supposed to be walking into a church in less than two hours.

Instead, I was standing in my parents' living room, asking about a hospital I had never heard of.

My mother sat on the sofa with both hands pressed against her knees.

Arthur stood beside the fireplace.

Neither would look at me.

I felt my heart pounding.

"Please tell me what happened."

Mom lifted her eyes.

"Before you turned four, I was hospitalized."

I stared at her.

"For what?"

She swallowed.

"A head injury."

My stomach tightened.

"How?"

She looked toward Arthur.

He shook his head gently.

"Denise, you don't have to—"

"Yes," she whispered. "I do."

She turned back toward me.

"Raymond came to our apartment one night."

I sat down slowly.

"He was demanding money."

I nodded.

"He had lost a large amount gambling. He said people were coming after him."

Her voice trembled.

"I told him I didn't have anything left."

I held my breath.

"He became angry."

Arthur's expression hardened.

Mom continued.

"He grabbed my purse. I tried to take it back."

She closed her eyes.

"We struggled."

My chest tightened.

"He pushed me."

I covered my mouth.

"I fell against the kitchen counter."

The room seemed to tilt.

Mom began crying.

"I remember waking up in the hospital."

I stared at her.

"Did Raymond do that?"

She nodded.

I felt sick.

For years, I had imagined my biological father as a man who simply couldn't handle responsibility.

A coward.

Someone who walked away.

But now I was hearing something worse.

He had hurt my mother.

And he was standing outside my wedding venue demanding the honor of walking me down the aisle.

"Why didn't you tell me?"

Mom looked devastated.

"Because I didn't want you growing up believing violence was part of your identity."

I shook my head.

"His actions aren't my identity."

"I know that now."

She wiped her face.

"But when you were little, I was afraid."

Arthur stepped closer.

"Your mother was trying to rebuild her life."

I looked at him.

"Where were you?"

He took a breath.

"I was her coworker then."

I frowned.

"You weren't dating?"

"Not yet."

Mom shook her head.

"Arthur was my supervisor at the community center."

I stared at him.

He continued.

"When Denise stopped coming to work, I called to check on her."

Mom looked down.

"He found out I was in the hospital."

Arthur's voice cracked.

"I went to visit."

He smiled sadly.

"You were sitting beside her bed eating crackers."

A memory stirred.

A tall man.

A blue jacket.

A small stuffed bear.

Arthur continued.

"You asked me if I could fix your mommy."

I began crying.

"I said I would do everything I could."

Mom wiped her cheeks.

"He helped me find legal assistance."

Arthur nodded.

"He drove you to appointments when your mother wasn't well enough."

I looked at him.

"You did all that before you married her?"

He smiled faintly.

"Yes."

My throat tightened.

He continued.

"Your mother didn't need a husband at that moment. She needed someone she could trust."

I covered my face.

For years, I thought Arthur entered our lives when everything had already settled.

Now I understood he had been there during the worst part.

But there was something else.

"Why does Raymond know about the hospital records?"

Mom looked uncomfortable.

"Because he was involved in the investigation."

I leaned forward.

"Was he charged?"

She nodded slowly.

"There was a criminal case."

My heart pounded.

"What happened?"

"Raymond accepted a plea agreement."

I stared.

"He was convicted?"

"Yes."

I felt anger rushing through me.

"Then why is he threatening to expose Arthur?"

Arthur's face changed.

"Because he wants to rewrite what happened."

I looked at him.

"What do you mean?"

"Raymond has told people that I manipulated your mother while she was vulnerable."

I shook my head.

"That's ridiculous."

"He's also claimed I kept you away from him."

Mom stood.

"That isn't true."

Her voice was suddenly strong.

"Raymond was given opportunities to maintain appropriate contact after the legal proceedings."

I looked at her.

"Did he take them?"

She shook her head.

"No."

I closed my eyes.

"He chose not to come."

"Yes."

I felt something inside me break.

All those birthdays.

All those school plays.

All those nights I wondered whether he missed me.

He had opportunities.

He simply didn't use them.

I began crying.

Arthur approached carefully.

"Nia?"

I looked up.

He opened his arms.

I stepped into them.

For a moment, I forgot about my dress.

I forgot about the wedding guests.

I forgot about Raymond.

I simply held the man who had spent twenty-three years proving what fatherhood looked like.

"I'm sorry," I whispered.

Arthur pulled back.

"For what?"

"For making you think I might replace you."

His eyes filled.

"Sweetheart, you didn't."

I shook my head.

"I saw your face."

He smiled sadly.

"I was scared."

That honesty hurt.

"Why?"

He looked down.

"Because I've loved you like my own daughter since you were five."

I began crying harder.

"And sometimes I still worry that biology will matter more to you than everything we've shared."

I grabbed his hand.

"It never will."

He nodded.

Then I remembered the document.

The surprise I had planned.

It lay on the carpet near his shoes.

I picked it up.

"Dad, you still haven't finished reading this."

He looked confused.

I handed it back.

The document was a certified court order approving my legal name change.

For years, my full name had been Nia Elise Ellis.

After months of paperwork and careful thought, I had petitioned to change it to Nia Elise Carter.

Carter was Arthur's surname.

And it was the name I wanted to carry into my marriage.

Arthur stared at the page.

Then he whispered, "You really did this?"

I nodded.

"Legally."

His hands began shaking.

"Before the wedding?"

"Yes."

He looked at me.

"Why didn't you tell me?"

I smiled through tears.

"Because I wanted it to be a surprise."

He laughed and cried at the same time.

I continued.

"I wanted to enter my marriage carrying the name of the man who taught me what love should look like."

Arthur covered his face.

Mom began crying again.

I stepped closer.

"Dad, your name is mine now."

He hugged me.

And for a moment, everything felt right.

Then my phone vibrated.

My fiancé, Elijah Brooks.

"Baby, where are you? The coordinator says your father is at the church causing a scene."

My stomach dropped.

I immediately called him.

"Elijah?"

"Nia, are you okay?"

"Yes. What's happening?"

He lowered his voice.

"A man named Raymond Ellis is demanding access to the bridal suite."

I closed my eyes.

"Don't let him in."

"I won't."

Elijah hesitated.

"He's telling people Arthur isn't your real father."

I felt anger rise.

"That's not his decision to make."

"I know."

Then Elijah said something that frightened me.

"He also brought someone."

I froze.

"Who?"

"A woman."

I frowned.

"What woman?"

Elijah paused.

"She says she's Raymond's wife."

I stared at the wall.

Raymond had remarried?

He had never mentioned it.

Elijah continued.

"And Nia, she's claiming she has documents proving Arthur lied to your mother."

My heart tightened.

"What documents?"

"I don't know."

I looked toward Arthur.

He was still holding my name-change order.

Then Elijah whispered, "Baby, she says she wants to stop the wedding before you make a terrible mistake."

I closed my eyes.

Raymond wasn't coming alone.

He had brought someone to support his story.

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And suddenly, I realized this might not be a desperate father's attempt to reclaim his daughter.

It might be a carefully planned attempt to destroy the family that had loved me in his absence.

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