Surprise

Chapter 1

“Get out.”

Veronica said it without turning her head.

Both hands stayed on the steering wheel of her black Escalade while the engine hummed and cold air blasted from the vents.

For a second, I thought I had misunderstood her.

I was ten years old.

I was still wearing the black pants, white shirt, and clip-on tie I had worn while watching my father’s coffin disappear into the ground less than two hours earlier.

“What?”

“As of today, you’re not my responsibility anymore.”

My name is Matthew Banks.

I’m twenty-eight now.

But every detail of July 12, 2008, has stayed inside me like a scar.

That morning, I stood beside an open grave in Riverdale, Georgia, while they buried Alexander Banks.

My father.

He was forty-three.

Three weeks earlier, doctors had told us he had an aggressive form of leukemia.

Three weeks.

That was all it took to turn the strongest man I knew into someone whose hands trembled when he tried to lift a glass of water.

My biological mother had died when I was five.

Dad married Veronica two years later.

When Dad was around, Veronica played the part perfectly.

She bought my school clothes.

Packed lunches.

Asked about spelling tests.

She laughed when Dad called us his little family.

But whenever he left the room, something inside her switched off.

She never hit me.

She did something quieter.

She made sure I understood I did not belong to her.

Three days before Dad died, he called me to his hospital bed.

“Matthew.”

His voice was weak.

I leaned close.

He pressed a folded piece of paper into my hand.

It was the back of a CVS receipt.

One name.

One phone number.

GABRIEL.

Dad closed my fingers around it.

“If anything happens, call him.”

I frowned.

“Who is he?”

Dad’s eyes filled.

“He’ll help you.”

Then he whispered something I didn’t understand.

“Forgive me, son.”

I put the receipt in my church-pants pocket.

I never asked again.

Three days later, Dad was gone.

After the funeral, Veronica told me to get into the Escalade.

I assumed we were going home to Peachtree City.

Instead, she drove south.

An hour passed.

Then she turned onto a county road.

Then a dirt road.

Red Georgia clay stretched between dry fields.

A crooked barbed-wire fence ran beside us.

There were no houses.

No stores.

No people.

When she stopped, my stomach tightened.

“Why are we stopping?”

“Because this is where you’re getting out.”

I stared at her.

“Here?”

“Here.”

“Why?”

She finally looked at me.

There was no grief in her face.

Only relief.

“Your father left everything to me.”

I didn’t understand.

“The house,” she continued. “The business. The accounts. Everything.”

“But I live with you.”

“You used to.”

My chest began to hurt.

She leaned closer.

“I’m not spending the next eight years raising another woman’s child.”

I hugged my backpack against myself.

Inside were a shark library book, a notebook, two pencils, and an empty water bottle.

Nothing useful.

“I don’t have money.”

“Not my problem.”

“I don’t have a phone.”

“There’s a town somewhere down that way.”

She pointed through the windshield.

“Walk.”

“Veronica, please.”

My voice cracked.

“Dad just died.”

She reached across me.

For one foolish second, I thought she was going to hug me.

Instead, she opened my door.

Heat rushed inside.

“Get out.”

I stepped onto the dirt.

I still don’t know why I obeyed.

Maybe because children are trained to believe adults know what happens next.

My shoes touched the road.

The door slammed.

“Wait.”

The Escalade turned around.

“Veronica!”

I ran after her.

I hit the back window with both hands.

“Please!”

She accelerated.

Red dust filled my mouth.

Within seconds, the SUV became a black shape in the distance.

Then nothing.

I stood alone.

That was when I finally understood.

My father had been buried that morning.

And before sunset, my stepmother had buried me too.

Just without the coffin.

I walked.

My funeral shoes were too small.

By the second hour, skin had rubbed off both heels.

The July heat pressed down on me.

My mouth became dry.

I had one swallow of warm water left and drank it too early.

The first house I reached looked abandoned.

Nobody answered.

At the second, a man opened the screen door.

“Can you help me?”

He looked at my clothes.

My dirty face.

Then closed the door.

I kept walking.

Near sunset, I reached a small white house with tomato plants growing beside the porch.

A woman opened the door.

She was maybe fifty-eight.

Gray threaded through her brown hair.

A dish towel hung over one shoulder.

Her eyes widened.

“Sweetheart, where are your people?”

I tried to answer calmly.

Instead, I started crying.

“We buried my dad today.”

She stepped outside.

“My stepmother left me on the road.”

Her expression changed instantly.

“Come inside.”

Her name was Lucille Tate.

She taught third grade in Pecan Hill.

She sat me at her kitchen table and gave me ice water.

Then another glass.

Then a tomato sandwich.

When she saw my heels, she filled a basin with warm water and Epsom salts.

I told her everything while she cleaned the blood from my socks.

Then I remembered the receipt.

“My dad gave me this.”

Lucille unfolded it.

“Gabriel?”

“He said to call him.”

She dialed.

The phone rang.

Again.

Again.

Nobody answered.

No voicemail.

That night Lucille gave me a cot in her sewing room.

I stared into darkness.

“What if he doesn’t want me?”

Lucille stood in the doorway.

She didn’t lie.

She didn’t promise some stranger would save me.

She said something better.

“Then tomorrow we figure out another plan.”

I swallowed.

“Together?”

“Together.”

She switched off the hallway light.

“But tonight, Matthew, you are safe.”

The next morning, she called again.

On the fourth ring, someone answered.

A deep male voice.

“Hello?”

Lucille introduced herself.

Then she said my name.

Silence.

Long enough that I thought the call had dropped.

Then the man whispered, “Matthew?”

I leaned closer.

“Alexander’s boy?”

Lucille explained what Veronica had done.

I heard the man’s breathing change.

Then he asked something strange.

“Did she tell Matthew she owns the entire estate?”

I grabbed the phone.

“She said Dad left everything to her.”

The man exhaled.

“Then she did exactly what my brother feared.”

I froze.

“My brother?”

Another silence.

“Yes, Matthew.”

His voice softened.

“Alexander was my brother.”

Dad had never told me.

Two days later, a dark green pickup pulled into Lucille’s driveway.

A tall man climbed out.

Gray at his temples.

Broad shoulders.

My father’s jaw.

He carried a thick manila folder.

I stood on Lucille’s porch holding the CVS receipt.

His eyes went to it.

Then to me.

He walked up the steps.

Stopped.

And knelt until we were eye to eye.

“Matthew.”

His voice shook.

“I haven’t spoken to your father in twelve years.”

I didn’t know what to say.

He looked at the receipt again.

Then at the folder under his arm.

“Do you know why your father told you to call me?”

I shook my head.

Gabriel Banks swallowed.

“Because twelve years ago, your father made me promise something.”

“What?”

His eyes filled.

“That if anything ever happened to him, I would protect you from Veronica.”

I stared at him.

Then Gabriel opened the folder.

And on top was a copy of my father’s will.

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A will that did not say what Veronica had told me.

Not even close.

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