Surprise

Chapter 2

The suite overlooked the city, but Jordan went straight to the couch.

He curled up with his backpack under one arm. I took off his shoes and covered him with the soft throw folded over the chair. Within minutes, he was asleep.

Daniel waited near the door.

“I can come back,” he said.

“I want to see the complaint.”

He handed me the folder. Inside was a brief report from that morning. A woman named Mrs. Ellis had come to visit her daughter, who was attending a conference at the hotel. Claire had questioned her in the lobby and refused to call the room until Mrs. Ellis produced a booking confirmation she could not have had.

“She wasn’t the guest who booked,” I said.

“No.”

“Did anyone contact her daughter?”

“A concierge recognized the name and called upstairs.”

“What happened after that?”

Daniel looked ashamed.

“Mrs. Ellis went up. Claire says there was a misunderstanding.”

I read the report again. The concierge’s account was attached. He said Claire had asked Mrs. Ellis to wait outside the hotel while he checked her story.

Outside. In the heat.

“Has Claire done this before?” I asked.

“Not that I know of.”

“That isn’t quite an answer.”

“I’ve heard complaints about her manner. I’ve spoken to her twice. I haven’t seen an incident like this.”

“Did you read Mrs. Ellis’s account before I arrived?”

“No.”

I closed the folder.

“Please preserve the desk camera footage from both incidents. I want the complaint records for the last year, including those closed without action.”

Daniel nodded.

“You’ll have them.”

“And Claire shouldn’t work the desk while this is reviewed.”

“I agree.”

When he left, I sat beside Jordan. In his sleep, he was still gripping the backpack strap. I eased it from his fingers and found his favorite toy car inside.

My father had loved cars too. He had given Jordan a little blue one on his fifth birthday, shortly before he died.

Dad never worked at the front desk of the hotel, but he knew the names of people who did. He had invested in the property years earlier and eventually become its largest shareholder. When illness made travel difficult, he relied on reports from the board. After his death, the trust held his stake for me until I completed the transition with the lawyers.

For months, I had read figures and meeting minutes. I had wanted to see the people behind them.

I had not told Daniel I was arriving a day early. I wanted to stay one night as a guest before the formal board visit. I had not imagined my first conversation would be an argument about whether I could check in.

Jordan woke before dinner.

“Can we leave?” he asked.

“We can, if you want to.”

He looked toward the window.

“Will that lady be downstairs?”

“Not at the desk tonight.”

“Did I do something?”

“No. You stood beside me and told me how you felt. I’m glad you did.”

He leaned against me.

“She sounded mad at us.”

“I know.”

I let him choose dinner. We ate in the suite while he told me about the buildings he could see from the window. At bedtime, he asked whether Grandpa had ever stayed in this room.

“I don’t know. Maybe.”

“Would he have told her to stop?”

“He would have wanted her to treat you kindly.”

Jordan thought about that, then climbed into bed.

After he fell asleep, I called my aunt Denise. She had worked with Dad for years and still served on the hotel board.

“You got there early,” she said.

“Yes.”

“How does it look?”

“The suite is beautiful. Check-in wasn’t.”

I told her what happened. She let me finish.

“I’m sorry Jordan saw that,” she said.

“So am I. Daniel says there was another complaint this morning.”

“He sent me a message about the records.”

“Did you know about Claire?”

“I’ve met her. I knew she could be abrupt. I didn’t know she was turning people away.”

I believed Denise was surprised. I also wanted the records before accepting anyone’s understanding of the problem.

“I’m meeting with Daniel tomorrow,” I said.

“I’ll join you by video.”

“You don’t need to. I’d rather hear from staff first.”

Denise paused.

“Your father always said you should walk through a place before asking for its numbers.”

“He taught me that.”

After the call, I looked at the toy car on Jordan’s bedside table. Dad had loved this hotel because, as he used to say, a traveler needs someone to open the door and mean it.

I wrote those words in my notebook.

A message from Daniel came a few minutes later. The camera footage had been secured. Claire had been removed from the front desk pending review.

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Then another message arrived.

I’ve checked the complaint log. Mrs. Ellis’s report was filed under “guest confusion.” There are six more entries with that label.

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